WhiteNoise,
That purchase notification has several issues, including the message about when sync would be activated. A big issue is the format of the message - non-essential stuff is bright and readable, while essential stuff is difficult to read.
To remedy this, I suggest using only white text on black background (or black text on white background for readability. The message should be as clear as possible, emphasizing what the customer should do and what to expect:
Thanks for supporting Obsidian! Obsidian couldn’t have become what it is today without help from amazing people like you.
For Sync and Publish, at the moment, we only accept PayPal manually and for annual subscriptions. Therefore, please:
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Write your Obsidian account email address and the service you purchased in the PayPal “Notes” section.
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After payment, forward your PayPal receipt to support@obsidian.md so we can watch out for your upcoming payment and send you further instructions.
We’ll try to process the payment as soon as possible. This may take up to three business days.
What is critical is making the message as short and concise as possible. This should make customer happier and improve the signup process.
Regards,
Dan.